關係子句:幫你省字的句子外掛
想像你在一間擁擠的咖啡店描述朋友:「She is the person. She is wearing a green jacket. She helped me study last week. She has the laptop with stickers.」這樣可以,但聽起來像每個句子都各自抵達,而且拒絕坐在一起。
關係子句讓英文能順順地連接這些想法:"She is the person who helped me study last week." 一個句子,少一點重複,多一點流動。
Quick Answer
關係子句會提供名詞的更多資訊。它通常以 who、which、that、where 或 when 等關係詞開頭。
- The woman who called you is my manager.
- I found the notebook that I lost yesterday.
- This is the cafe where we met.
- Monday is the day when the new schedule begins.
人物用 who,事物或動物用 which,許多限定性子句中的人物或事物都可用 that,地點用 where,時間用 when。
The Pattern
先放一個名詞,再加上一個辨認或描述它的子句。
noun + relative word + extra information
- the student who asked the question
- the file that you uploaded
- the restaurant where we had lunch
- the year when everything changed
有兩大類:限定性與非限定性。
Defining Relative Clauses
限定性子句告訴我們你指的是哪個人或哪個東西。沒有它,句子會不完整或太模糊。
- The book that you recommended was excellent.
- People who sleep well often learn faster.
- The room where we met was too small.
不使用逗號,因為資訊是必要的。
Non-Defining Relative Clauses
非限定性子句加入額外資訊。名詞本身已經清楚。
- My laptop, which I bought last year, is already full.
- Lena, who works in marketing, designed the poster.
- The library, where I study on weekends, closes at six.
使用逗號,因為子句是附加資訊。拿掉它,主要句子仍然成立。
重要:that 通常不用在非限定性子句中。說 "My laptop, which I bought last year",不要說 "My laptop, that I bought last year."
Natural Examples
People
- The teacher who explained the rule saved us twenty minutes.
- The friend that sent the link was right.
- Anyone who has tried this exercise knows it is harder than it looks.
想清楚指向人時,用 who。That 在限定性子句裡也很常見,尤其在日常口語中。
Things
- The app that tracks my habits is surprisingly honest.
- The chair which broke yesterday has been replaced.
- I read an article that changed how I plan my week.
對事物來說,that 在限定性子句裡非常常見。Which 在許多情況也正確,尤其在較正式的寫作中。
Places
- This is the office where I had my first interview.
- I found a quiet corner where nobody was talking.
- The hotel where we stayed had a rooftop garden.
當名詞是地點時,where 可以取代 "in which" 或 "at which"。
Times
- Friday is the day when the results come out.
- I remember the moment when the lights went out.
- Summer is the season when the city feels slower.
When 會把額外資訊連到時間名詞上。
Leaving Out the Relative Word
當 who、which 或 that 是子句中的受詞時,有時可以省略:
The movie that we watched was strange.
The movie we watched was strange.
The person who I called did not answer.
The person I called did not answer.
但當它是主詞時,不要省略:
- The person who called me was polite.
- Not: The person called me was polite.
第二個版本聽起來像那個人把你叫作 polite,故事就變成另一回事了。
Which or That?
在日常限定性子句中,談事物時 that 常常是簡單選擇:
- The file that I downloaded is corrupted.
- The idea that changed my mind was surprisingly simple.
Which 也常用於事物,尤其是子句補充額外資訊時:
- The file, which I downloaded this morning, is corrupted.
- The idea, which sounded strange at first, worked well.
如果想要實用規則:子句是必要資訊、沒有逗號時,用 that。子句是額外資訊、有逗號時,用 which。真實用法有彈性,但這個規則能讓大多數寫作保持乾淨。
The Two-Sentence Test
建立關係子句的一個好方法,是先從兩個簡單句開始:
I met a designer. The designer built this app.
I met a designer who built this app.
We visited a town. The town has no traffic lights.
We visited a town that has no traffic lights.
如果第二句重複第一句的名詞,那個重複名詞的位置就是放關係詞的地方。這能讓子句貼在正確名詞旁邊,也能幫你避免多餘代名詞,例如 "the app that I downloaded it."
Common Traps
Trap 1: Using Which for People
"The woman which helped me" 聽起來不對。用 who 或 that:"The woman who helped me" 或 "The woman that helped me."
Trap 2: Forgetting Commas
比較:
- My brother who lives in Boston is visiting. 這暗示我可能不只一個 brother,我指的是住在 Boston 的那位。
- My brother, who lives in Boston, is visiting. 這表示我有一位 brother,並補充額外資訊:他住在 Boston。
逗號可以改變意思。
Trap 3: Using That After a Comma
非限定性子句要用 which 或 who:
- The camera, which was expensive, broke after a week.
- The speaker, who arrived late, apologized.
Trap 4: Adding Extra Pronouns
"The book that I bought it was expensive" 多了一個代名詞。關係詞已經連接受詞。說 "The book that I bought was expensive."
Trap 5: Confusing Where With Which
當名詞是地點,而且子句意思是「在那個地方」時,用 where。當地點名詞在子句裡做別的工作時,用 which。
- The cafe where we met is closed.
- The cafe which opened last year is closed.
Trap 6: Making the Clause Too Far From the Noun
讓關係子句靠近它描述的名詞。"I found a notebook in the drawer that had a red cover" 可能聽起來像 drawer 有紅色封面。更好:"I found a notebook that had a red cover in the drawer." 如果句子還是太擠,就拆成兩句。順暢的寫作比硬把每個細節塞進一長串更重要。
Wrong / Better / Why
| Wrong | Better | Why |
|---|---|---|
| The person which called you is here. | The person who called you is here. | 人用 who。 |
| The book that I bought it was cheap. | The book that I bought was cheap. | 不要再用 it 重複受詞。 |
| My phone, that I bought yesterday, is broken. | My phone, which I bought yesterday, is broken. | 非限定性子句不用 that。 |
| The city which I grew up is quiet. | The city where I grew up is quiet. | 子句指向地點。 |
| The woman helped me was kind. | The woman who helped me was kind. | 關係詞是主詞,不能省略。 |
| I remember the day where we met. | I remember the day when we met. | 時間名詞用 when。 |
Mini Practice
選出最佳關係詞:who、which、that、where 或 when。
- The student _____ won the prize looked shocked.
- This is the park _____ we play tennis.
- I found the keys _____ I lost yesterday.
- My tablet, _____ I use for reading, needs charging.
- Saturday is the day _____ we clean the apartment.
- The article _____ explained the issue was very clear.
- The manager, _____ joined last month, is leading the project.
- The restaurant _____ opened downtown is already popular.
Answer Key
- who 或 that - 正在辨認一個人。
- where - 子句指向地點。
- that 或省略關係詞 - keys 是子句受詞。
- which - 關於事物的非限定性子句。
- when - 名詞是時間。
- that 或 which - 正在辨認一個事物。
- who - 關於人的非限定性子句。
- that 或 which - restaurant 是關係子句的主詞。
Tiny Summary
關係子句會替名詞加入資訊。
人用 who,事物用 which,地點用 where,時間用 when。
That 可用於許多限定性子句,但不要用在逗號後。
逗號表示子句是額外資訊。
關係子句能連接屬於同一件事的想法,幫你省字。
