關係子句:幫你省字的句子外掛

關係子句:幫你省字的句子外掛

想像你在一間擁擠的咖啡店描述朋友:「She is the person. She is wearing a green jacket. She helped me study last week. She has the laptop with stickers.」這樣可以,但聽起來像每個句子都各自抵達,而且拒絕坐在一起。

關係子句讓英文能順順地連接這些想法:"She is the person who helped me study last week." 一個句子,少一點重複,多一點流動。

Quick Answer

關係子句會提供名詞的更多資訊。它通常以 whowhichthatwherewhen 等關係詞開頭。

  • The woman who called you is my manager.
  • I found the notebook that I lost yesterday.
  • This is the cafe where we met.
  • Monday is the day when the new schedule begins.

人物用 who,事物或動物用 which,許多限定性子句中的人物或事物都可用 that,地點用 where,時間用 when

The Pattern

先放一個名詞,再加上一個辨認或描述它的子句。

noun + relative word + extra information

  • the student who asked the question
  • the file that you uploaded
  • the restaurant where we had lunch
  • the year when everything changed

有兩大類:限定性與非限定性。

Defining Relative Clauses

限定性子句告訴我們你指的是哪個人或哪個東西。沒有它,句子會不完整或太模糊。

  • The book that you recommended was excellent.
  • People who sleep well often learn faster.
  • The room where we met was too small.

不使用逗號,因為資訊是必要的。

Non-Defining Relative Clauses

非限定性子句加入額外資訊。名詞本身已經清楚。

  • My laptop, which I bought last year, is already full.
  • Lena, who works in marketing, designed the poster.
  • The library, where I study on weekends, closes at six.

使用逗號,因為子句是附加資訊。拿掉它,主要句子仍然成立。

重要:that 通常不用在非限定性子句中。說 "My laptop, which I bought last year",不要說 "My laptop, that I bought last year."

Natural Examples

People

  • The teacher who explained the rule saved us twenty minutes.
  • The friend that sent the link was right.
  • Anyone who has tried this exercise knows it is harder than it looks.

想清楚指向人時,用 whoThat 在限定性子句裡也很常見,尤其在日常口語中。

Things

  • The app that tracks my habits is surprisingly honest.
  • The chair which broke yesterday has been replaced.
  • I read an article that changed how I plan my week.

對事物來說,that 在限定性子句裡非常常見。Which 在許多情況也正確,尤其在較正式的寫作中。

Places

  • This is the office where I had my first interview.
  • I found a quiet corner where nobody was talking.
  • The hotel where we stayed had a rooftop garden.

當名詞是地點時,where 可以取代 "in which" 或 "at which"。

Times

  • Friday is the day when the results come out.
  • I remember the moment when the lights went out.
  • Summer is the season when the city feels slower.

When 會把額外資訊連到時間名詞上。

Leaving Out the Relative Word

whowhichthat 是子句中的受詞時,有時可以省略:

  • The movie that we watched was strange.

  • The movie we watched was strange.

  • The person who I called did not answer.

  • The person I called did not answer.

但當它是主詞時,不要省略:

  • The person who called me was polite.
  • Not: The person called me was polite.

第二個版本聽起來像那個人把你叫作 polite,故事就變成另一回事了。

Which or That?

在日常限定性子句中,談事物時 that 常常是簡單選擇:

  • The file that I downloaded is corrupted.
  • The idea that changed my mind was surprisingly simple.

Which 也常用於事物,尤其是子句補充額外資訊時:

  • The file, which I downloaded this morning, is corrupted.
  • The idea, which sounded strange at first, worked well.

如果想要實用規則:子句是必要資訊、沒有逗號時,用 that。子句是額外資訊、有逗號時,用 which。真實用法有彈性,但這個規則能讓大多數寫作保持乾淨。

The Two-Sentence Test

建立關係子句的一個好方法,是先從兩個簡單句開始:

  • I met a designer. The designer built this app.

  • I met a designer who built this app.

  • We visited a town. The town has no traffic lights.

  • We visited a town that has no traffic lights.

如果第二句重複第一句的名詞,那個重複名詞的位置就是放關係詞的地方。這能讓子句貼在正確名詞旁邊,也能幫你避免多餘代名詞,例如 "the app that I downloaded it."

Common Traps

Trap 1: Using Which for People

"The woman which helped me" 聽起來不對。用 whothat:"The woman who helped me" 或 "The woman that helped me."

Trap 2: Forgetting Commas

比較:

  • My brother who lives in Boston is visiting. 這暗示我可能不只一個 brother,我指的是住在 Boston 的那位。
  • My brother, who lives in Boston, is visiting. 這表示我有一位 brother,並補充額外資訊:他住在 Boston。

逗號可以改變意思。

Trap 3: Using That After a Comma

非限定性子句要用 whichwho

  • The camera, which was expensive, broke after a week.
  • The speaker, who arrived late, apologized.

Trap 4: Adding Extra Pronouns

"The book that I bought it was expensive" 多了一個代名詞。關係詞已經連接受詞。說 "The book that I bought was expensive."

Trap 5: Confusing Where With Which

當名詞是地點,而且子句意思是「在那個地方」時,用 where。當地點名詞在子句裡做別的工作時,用 which

  • The cafe where we met is closed.
  • The cafe which opened last year is closed.

Trap 6: Making the Clause Too Far From the Noun

讓關係子句靠近它描述的名詞。"I found a notebook in the drawer that had a red cover" 可能聽起來像 drawer 有紅色封面。更好:"I found a notebook that had a red cover in the drawer." 如果句子還是太擠,就拆成兩句。順暢的寫作比硬把每個細節塞進一長串更重要。

Wrong / Better / Why

Wrong Better Why
The person which called you is here. The person who called you is here. 人用 who。
The book that I bought it was cheap. The book that I bought was cheap. 不要再用 it 重複受詞。
My phone, that I bought yesterday, is broken. My phone, which I bought yesterday, is broken. 非限定性子句不用 that。
The city which I grew up is quiet. The city where I grew up is quiet. 子句指向地點。
The woman helped me was kind. The woman who helped me was kind. 關係詞是主詞,不能省略。
I remember the day where we met. I remember the day when we met. 時間名詞用 when。

Mini Practice

選出最佳關係詞:whowhichthatwherewhen

  1. The student _____ won the prize looked shocked.
  2. This is the park _____ we play tennis.
  3. I found the keys _____ I lost yesterday.
  4. My tablet, _____ I use for reading, needs charging.
  5. Saturday is the day _____ we clean the apartment.
  6. The article _____ explained the issue was very clear.
  7. The manager, _____ joined last month, is leading the project.
  8. The restaurant _____ opened downtown is already popular.

Answer Key

  1. whothat - 正在辨認一個人。
  2. where - 子句指向地點。
  3. that 或省略關係詞 - keys 是子句受詞。
  4. which - 關於事物的非限定性子句。
  5. when - 名詞是時間。
  6. thatwhich - 正在辨認一個事物。
  7. who - 關於人的非限定性子句。
  8. thatwhich - restaurant 是關係子句的主詞。

Tiny Summary

關係子句會替名詞加入資訊。

人用 who,事物用 which,地點用 where,時間用 when

That 可用於許多限定性子句,但不要用在逗號後。

逗號表示子句是額外資訊。

關係子句能連接屬於同一件事的想法,幫你省字。